////////////////////////////////////////////// General Notes: -these characters are strong, but not 'big'. They're based off nerds, not jocks. So lets keep the muscle/bulk down. -Sharp silouettes -No real textures as the lighting is so stark. So really focus on the highlight lines, glowing bits, and illuminated areas -I'd imagine there being 3 types of surfaces: Matte (cloth, flexy bits), Gloss (armor, metalic), Glow (bulbs, illuminated stripes) -Flexibility is key, so keep the bulk to a minimual around the key bend areas: knees, ankles, elbows, wrist, shoulders ////////////////////////////////////////////// Female: Body/Throwing disk Note: She's going to throw/shot the disks off her gaunlets, then recharge/generate new ones 1. No hair, helmet/visor 2. These disk shoulder pads wont deform where they are. Put it either on the upper bicep (fully on the arm) or remove it 3. Love these elbows and the style of this tech/intergration 4. Dont have the chest armor dip down, have it arch up like in the 6's chest 5. Love the tech shoes and feel, though we absolutely must have high heels 6. Pretty much love this girls clothing and lines, just no hair, face, ect. 7. Helmet with antenna is a cool silouette 8. Need an Information Disk on their back, ABSOLUTE MUST for this competition 9. Maybe instead of a visor, you could do some sexy sci fi shades 10. High heels with red illuminated soles 11. Pendulum/chest centered glow bit 12. Love the back lacing, similar to 6's, though six does it better 13. Just kinda neat, like the plug ports 14. Thigh high boots that actually break the silouette of the thigh would be great 15. Lacing on boots, playing with the lines for illumination 16. Cut away bits, exposed area, could be really cool 17. Elbow was interesting 18. Like the break in silouet on the forearm 19. Liking the garder belt connecting the thigh highs 20. Calf breaking the silouette with plugs is cool 21. Gaunlet. She needs one on each arm 22. Metalic High heels, too bulky in general, but thought you could get the shapes out of it 23. High heels with red soles, abs must ////////////////////////////////////////////// Male: Body/Solid Shield/Half forearm shield Note: He's going to have half the shield attached to each forearm. So when he slams his forearm together it creates a full shield 24. Love the two closest gas masks with the cylindars and glow bulbs! 25. Dig the armored version, no skin though, have it be cloth if need be 26. Not enough negative space around head for movement, like design elements but too bulky 27. no needle toes, one big toe and a single/all incompasing flap for the other 4 28. Cool body lines 29. knee pads are too bulky but like the shapes/design 30. LOVE the Glow palms and inner fingers. 31. Need an Information Disk on their back, ABSOLUTE MUST for this competition 32. General Shield ref, dont make square, needs to be circular 33. Thigh packs: change in silouette, doesnt affect mobility, fun design = love it 34. Knee pads, shin guards. All great, just be mind full not to make the ankle guards to bulky/limiting 35. Liken the Elbow flaps, inner tubes. Though shoulders/clavs are awful, no mobility at all